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[SnakesBite]

Heres My first release

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[mrmystery83]

Great job there mate. Always good to see new layout creators. It's not one i've ever played before so i'm looking forward to having a go on it.

Nice one. Keep 'em coming

[Bencrest]

With about an extra 10 minutes I think this could be made to look like a layout and not a 'Leaning Tower of Pisa' with fruit machine lamps and reels thrown at it.

I appreciate that this is your first layout, but in my opinion thats no excuse to release things that quite frankly look god-awful.

It might be because you had crap source artwork, or don't have the correct graphical tools, but I won't insult your intelligence by saying it's 'great' because it's clearly not. It's 'functional'.

[DaemonX]

Gotta agree with Ben, sory to be harsh, but although i's a first release, it leans, none of the stars light up from the poor graphics on the right of the reels, and the top looks awful.

It is playable though, however, not really a DX in todays standards.

[fruitsnappa]

Thanks. But i think i'll be sticking to DADS version.

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[tara10825]

Here is a better version Thanks for your try though.

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[todd1970]

Yep nothing wrong with a bit of constructive critisisim (spelling) ??..Although its the thought that counts and contributing to the FME scene in anyway shape or form gets my upmost respect.

I dont know the first thing about DX'ing..so your a better man than than me for making this layout in the 1st place.

Hope you dont take the guys comments to heart and give up..learn by your mistakes and keep the good work up..and we hope to see many more of your releases in the future.

[SnakesBite]

No Critisisim is always good from the experience ones it'll make me a beter DX'er cheers for Downloading nough guys

[SnakesBite]

Before I release again are make sure it's a little more decent than what I done I realise now I should of took my time on it, I apoligise for this poor and rushed performance Snake

[ady]

Before I release again are make sure it's a little more decent than what I done I realise now I should of took my time on it, I apoligise for this poor and rushed performance Snake

Nothing whatsoever to be sorry for

May I suggest that when you have created another One just PM One of the regular users and pop it over to them in private, they'll have a peek and give you any opinion prior to it being uploaded.

[SnakesBite]

Im really want to inprove but im having problems, you know the lamps that have two lights like Red and Blue-on lamps then the normal-off lamps how the hell do you make them.
Hope you understand what im trying to say please anyone please help me on this .
It's proberly simple but i ani't got a clue so Please anyone help. Help would be much appricated. Plus anyone that can help me with my spelling lol thanks Snakes

[nails]

With about an extra 10 minutes I think this could be made to look like a layout and not a 'Leaning Tower of Pisa' with fruit machine lamps and reels thrown at it.

I appreciate that this is your first layout, but in my opinion thats no excuse to release things that quite frankly look god-awful.

It might be because you had crap source artwork, or don't have the correct graphical tools, but I won't insult your intelligence by saying it's 'great' because it's clearly not. It's 'functional'.

this comes from a guy who quit the scene....

if you go back a few years when people who were getting the hang of the emu, people general releases were aweful.

It may not standup next to pooks releases for example, but for a first release i would congratulate the guy for bothering to get to grips with it, and not shoot him down in flames.

well done m8, and hope to see more releases in the future.

[SnakesBite]

Hi again ive had a second bash see what you think and enjoy Snakes I know but please excuse the lamps on the right. Im still trying to suss em but I've done something different here it's worth a look. Just a little mini arcade going on here its proberly already been done just take a look now biatches

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[ady]

how did you suss the lamps?...DADs reply?

If so a little thank-you for your help goes miles

That looks a million times better..well done....but the mini arcade???? where???? all you have done is added some sideart!!!!

edit, and Bitches is spelt BITCHES, daft comment really!

[nails]

blimey, what a turnaround!

looks like hes gone from strength to strength. well done

[SnakesBite]

Cheers for Dads help he didn't really realise he was helping me so much thanks Dad Im still working on the red blue lamps thanks Dad Ady my spelling also needs working on mate lol

[No1Stoney]

I dont know why your all insulting the layout. At least he has given his time to at least try to create a layout. Unlike all the leechers out there.

I know your not all saying it in a nasty way but a thanks and some helpful hints would have been a boost for him

-No1Stoney

[VampUK]

I know your not all saying it in a nasty way but a thanks and some helpful hints would have been a boost for him

-No1Stoney

This is a fair point a few hints on sorting it would of been good in a few of the posts. The main trouble is people pushing out DX's with comments like "It took me 30 minutes". As a whole the standard of DX's has been poor of late, thats mine included.
Good on you Snakes for having a go, I hope you will continue. Practice makes perfect.

[mrgspot]

FFS guys, give this chap a little bit of credit. Not only has he bothered contributing to this site, he even took the critisism on the chin... and made it better.

people join this site everyday and the first question is, How do i download one of these things....... This gets our backs up, and we all rush at once, at being the first person who tells him to read the F******* knowledgebase. This guy has 15 posts and is already releasing DXs. who gives a shit if its the worse layout ever, he still gave it a try!!!!!

Ben, I really think you are out of order with your comments fella, he tried and luckilly for you he took it on the chin. If this had been anyone else, you would have been very unpopular by know.......

Well done Snake, good luck with your next one.